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Great job I look forward to new updates and more stages of growth. 

mirror scene, level 10: download error

there's a bug with the copywriting. When you try to work on you laptop it checks

if player.copywriting_exp < 1. Pretty sure that should be

if player.copywriting_lvl < 1

Tnx for catching that, releasing it as a silent patch now

save won't stay saved

Please work on this, it's very good

so it feels like nothing happens when you read the books for the copy right skil ot am i just wrong?

Hm... I think I found a bug.
I reached Mass 8 before getting advanced lifting and now the game says I already read it but I only just bought it.

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Good game. Really  perspective. Hope you will not abandon it. And please add more stage before becoming so muscles, and girl in library, she becomes huge so quick. 

Images of last  update are really good.

You made good work partner

Great job, I look forward to new updates and pictures and growth stages, I would like to see if it would be possible for him to compete in bodybuilding contests. 

I think cashvertising is broken too. Cannot seem to make any money at it, regardless of how much I read.

You're suppose to get the laptop from the second hand store to write copy.

I have. Then I read the cashvertising book, alot, and still nothing.

I see the issue, I'll handle it next update

Bug report playing this in browser: Reading with 0 energy moves the game to the start menu and there is no way to cancel the reading interaction. also starting a new game resumes the old save.

Good catch, I overlooked a line in the code that messed it up, fixed now.

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I'm going to be honest, this game is not good. It does its job as a demo but there is a MAJOR lack in visual consistency. Every image feels like a completely different character even though its not. Also while I'm not 100% opposed to using AI images in games since I think it gives creators who are not as artistically gifted a way to get some art into their games. At least put in the bare minimum effort to make the images consistent.

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good demo, hope to see more of it

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This is a good game, its quite fun. And I like the AI artwork.

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Good start to the project. But I would like to see the artwork in the same style and the sound after the exercises is a bit annoying

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Is the art AI? I don't want to say it is without asking, it looks like it, which IF it is, would be extremely disappointing.

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For transparency yes! The art is AI generated.

I made the game alone which takes time and different skillsets and since not an artist, so I use AI tools.

If I want to implement non AI art I would need to either:

  1. Find an artist that wants to volunteer for free.
  2. Wait for donations to come.
  3. Lock the game behind a price tag.

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As an artist, I'm very disappointed, I understand these tools are easy to use but they're built on theft and actively hurt artists.

You're also wanting to get into, or are interested in game design, a field that employs many artists. 

I'm not saying you're a bad person, I just hate these tools with a passion and you should realise you're hurting artists that both work in the industry you have an interest in and aspiring artists wanting to break out into the games industry.

If you don't have access to drawing your own art or an artists, I would suggest trying to make a different game rather than a VN that's built mainly on art.

There's a discord community, I'm a part of it, it's called Game Dev Network. 

It's very popular, I encourage you, join, there's a section for people to collab on game jams or games in general, post there, see if you can link up with some artists.

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womp womp

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Cringe

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Looking good. Waiting for more updates.

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looks good so far